Score: 2

"Maybe if I were 12..."

submission: Owls

date: June 19, 2008

and laughed at poop jokes, this would be funny. This is just random nonsense that loops over and over. How this got to the top spot I'll never know.

How to improve:

- Design your content for an audience of 13+ not 12 and under. This is newgrounds not barneyland.
- Add some structure to your flash, maybe even a plot =o
- Don't loop your flashes, it almost always makes them look cheap and poorly done .

Score: 7

"this was actually kind of funny"

submission: Drive Drive Revolution 7

date: April 29, 2008

Lmao so many details you notice after looking at it the second time.

Score: 3

"Eh..."

submission: Sprite TV 2

date: February 26, 2008

Wasn't really funny. Most of the jokes seemed immature or too random to be funny. I think the general audience for this flash would be people with severe cases of ADD who laugh at poop jokes.

Helpful advice:
- Spend more time on quality rather than quantity
- Focus more on a central plot rather than skipping frames every 5 seconds (yes I know this was intended)

Score: 10

"Another great piece"

submission: _-={Deranged Sanctuary}=-_

date: April 3, 2008

I must say this is my favorite track. You really have a talent, everything you compose is simply amazing. I've downloaded all of your songs and listen to them nearly every day while playing cabal. I think one thing that sets you apart from most other artists is that each of your pieces has its own unique sound and rhythm. It's like visiting a new world each time you switch to the next one.

You should really make an album. It would give fans like me a chance to show gratitude and would likely attract new ones too.

Score: 9

"Amazin"

submission: GRAW Remix

date: April 1, 2007

I heard this song in a flash submission and instantly liked it. Luckly the author gave you credit, so I was able to find it. Really cool sounds and rhythm. Never heard the original but I'm sure you improved it a lot. Nice job!

Score: 10

"Best"

submission: _-=[On your Cold Grave]=-_

date: February 26, 2007

This is my favorite piece. So calm, relaxing, and yet depressing. Truely the saddest song I have ever heard. You really know how to capture mood, something most other's can't do.