Score: 2

"Maybe if I were 12..."

submission: Owls

date: June 19, 2008

and laughed at poop jokes, this would be funny. This is just random nonsense that loops over and over. How this got to the top spot I'll never know.

How to improve:

- Design your content for an audience of 13+ not 12 and under. This is newgrounds not barneyland.
- Add some structure to your flash, maybe even a plot =o
- Don't loop your flashes, it almost always makes them look cheap and poorly done .

Score: 7

"this was actually kind of funny"

submission: Drive Drive Revolution 7

date: April 29, 2008

Lmao so many details you notice after looking at it the second time.

Score: 3

"Eh..."

submission: Sprite TV 2

date: February 26, 2008

Wasn't really funny. Most of the jokes seemed immature or too random to be funny. I think the general audience for this flash would be people with severe cases of ADD who laugh at poop jokes.

Helpful advice:
- Spend more time on quality rather than quantity
- Focus more on a central plot rather than skipping frames every 5 seconds (yes I know this was intended)

Score: 4

"i have a question"

submission: pro racing

date: February 11, 2008

In real life when you're in a car and you veer off to the side of the road, does the grass become like glue and cause the car to go at 5% of its speed?

Score: 3

"big flaw"

submission: Clayos the game: Demo

date: February 8, 2008

The claymen fall right through the platform if you try to move it upwards. I don't understand how there could be such a critical flaw in what appeared to be a professionally done game.

Score: 4

"...."

submission: Makoto-Lee Appears

date: January 28, 2008

Typical sprite movie. Here's two things I think you could change to make it better

- speed up the text or add voices instead, more time seemed to be spent on waiting for the text than there was actual animation
- zoom up on the characters and decrease the total area of the background

Score: 10

"Wow"

submission: The English Paper

date: January 13, 2008

Everything about this was great, animation, music, etc. It being a true story made it even better and more entertaining to watch. Great job, added to my favorites = )

Score: 3

"sticky walls are unrealistic"

submission: Table Run

date: December 11, 2007

Let me ask you a question. If you are running around a wall in real life and you accidentally touch it, do you get sucked into it and lose half of your speed?

Score: 0

"why dont you try making your own games..."

submission: Pocket Pool

date: December 10, 2007

instead of stealing common games from major websites like candystand. This game is posted on just about every mini game website on the web including newgrounds. Now you decide to submit it adding to the thousands of preexisting copies just so you can get flash points? Wow pretty lame if you ask me 0/0

Score: 8

"...."

submission: Albino Cop

date: December 10, 2007

Kinda weird but thats probably why its cool. Is albino cop a girl or a guy? If I had to guess I'd say guy but just slightly.